Tuesday, July 24, 2012

GBE #62 Breathless

He left the restaurant in

breathless anguish,

ring clutched in his hand,

her "no" echoing in his ears.



Copyright Steven Clark 2012


Submitted for GBE #62 topic:  Breathless

14 comments:

  1. It happens! One has to know the answer before asking the question, right? Well written. :-)

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  2. short and while the story not sweet, the write is

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  3. I could actually feel the emotion within these few words. Great piece to write and share!!!

    Jane from SW Ohio

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  4. what I really liked about this was how you conveyed so much with so few words. An art.

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  5. Wow, that's a lot of breathless power.

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  6. Good take on breathless! Poor guy!...

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  7. I can feel the anguish in your words. Short, sweet, and to the point and ultimately brilliant! ♥

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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  8. Aww. How sad.


    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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  9. Oh no, that made me sad. I felt the pain.

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