Sunday, August 19, 2012

GBE #66 Snapshot In Time

Bloodletting

Summer of 1991.

You, topless, smoking a joint.

Your lips curl up in a smile, beckoning me.

In the Darkening Of The Light we join.


Copyright Steven Clark 2012

Submitted for GBE #66:  Snapshot

*This was a snapshot in time from my past...."Bloodletting" is the name of an album by the band Concrete Blonde and "Darkening of the Light" was one of the songs off that album.  I originally wrote this back in April if anyone thinks it looks familiar.

14 comments:

  1. Love it Steve! You are such a great blogger! :)

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  2. WOW, short, sweet, and to the point plus absolutely brilliant!!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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  3. This is awe inspiring, concisely so, amazing! :)

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  4. yes it did look familiar but then I can and sometimes do read your stuff over and over

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  5. you must be....."M A u Nnnnnnnnnnn" :0)

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  6. And this is why you write. Perfect. Now I need a smoke. ;-)

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  7. The true mark of a great writer is to be able to tell a story in few words. You do that well.

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  8. Didn't know you had a rockstar's blood in you. :)

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  9. It's hard to believe 1991 was 21 years ago. I like the music.

    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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  10. Awesome. Really loved the music.

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