Bloodletting
Summer of 1991.
You, topless, smoking a joint.
Your lips curl up in a smile, beckoning me.
In the Darkening Of The Light we join.
Copyright Steven Clark 2012
Submitted for GBE #66: Snapshot
*This was a snapshot in time from my past...."Bloodletting" is the name of an album by the band Concrete Blonde and "Darkening of the Light" was one of the songs off that album. I originally wrote this back in April if anyone thinks it looks familiar.
Love it Steve! You are such a great blogger! :)
ReplyDeleteWOW, short, sweet, and to the point plus absolutely brilliant!!
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more please ..
ReplyDeleteThis is awe inspiring, concisely so, amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteyes it did look familiar but then I can and sometimes do read your stuff over and over
ReplyDeleteyou must be....."M A u Nnnnnnnnnnn" :0)
ReplyDeleteSimple but sexy. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteAnd this is why you write. Perfect. Now I need a smoke. ;-)
ReplyDeleteThe true mark of a great writer is to be able to tell a story in few words. You do that well.
ReplyDeleteExcellent.
ReplyDeleteDidn't know you had a rockstar's blood in you. :)
ReplyDeleteSuperb!
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to believe 1991 was 21 years ago. I like the music.
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Awesome. Really loved the music.
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